2013년 1월 22일 화요일

Argument essay

Writing an argument essay!

<Using cable car  in public parks has a good effect>


class.19 Joanne


Many people think that using cable cars in public parks has a bad effect. Yes, it has some problems but it also has good effects, too. Therefore, using cable cars in public parks is a good idea. I will present some examples.

First, all people can go to mountain. Especially children, old people and disabled persons can't climb the mountain well. But if there is a cable car, all people can climb the mountains. Actually a public park means 'All people can use this park' But if some people can't climb, it is not possible for all people to use. We have to make it possible for all people to be able to climb.

Second, unused cable cars can create pollution. About 20 years ago, we could bring some food (like soup, nuddle,.....use fire) into mountain. But it made terrible pollution so we can't bring these things now. So many people bring processed foodstuff. Of course, people should dump their trash in the appoint area. But, some people(perhaps many people)don't do it. They throw trash into the road, near the river and so on. So trash is piled up in the mountains and the mountain becomes dirty. If we establish a cable car, we can reduce trash in the mountain.

Third, cable car can help a region's economy. Some people who live in the country, they sell medicinal herbs and honey. thy can't make many money. But if there is a cable car, many people will come.Then they will eat food, buy mountain-climbing supplies, even sleep there! The country people can make more money than it develop region's economy.

Of course, some people disagree. They suggest that we should make a comfortable road instead of a cable car so anyone can use it. But it isn't easy to do. If they feel sore in their legs or part of body? They can't drive the mountains, also it is unfair thing for them if the do not have a car. 

Some people also think that using a cable car can create pollution. Building iron tops and pouring cement into the mountain is a really bad thing for the environment. But, using a cable car doesn't harm the environment. It is established in a limited area so the environment adapts and changes.

Also some people disagree and think that public mountain's purpose is not for region's economy. It's purpose is to enjoy the mountain. Yeah, it is right, too. But using cable cars makes it more comfortable to climb mountains, so climbers can climb easily. Also it helps the region's economy so people who live the country can have many advantages. Using cable car creates more advantages than not using a cable car.

Using a cable car helps everyone to climb the mountain, also it can reduce pollution, too. Of course, we have to use eco-friendly site.  And it has to consider the environment. So I think that we have to use cable cars to give us comfort and provide a service to us.


2013년 1월 20일 일요일

drabble

Life in the GLPS is wonderful.
AMAZING!!

<Yes, I know>
She picked up the phone. She shook her finger and called to someone. She said something to someone. Few minutes later, someone came her room and left a box. She opened the box.
 Fried chickens were there. She bit chicken's leg then chicken's smell spread in her mouth. Crinkling skin and soft lean meat excited her tongue. She opened a can.
Coke made beautiful bubbles. She gulped coke and felt refreshing. Then she picked up a piece of radish. She stated chewing.........
Then, the morning call rang, she opened her eyes.
Oh,yes, it's me.
I'm in GLPS.
Yes, I know.(It's a dream)
by Joanne.

diamond poem

It is my diamond poem.


<Yellow card>
sad angry
crying  worrying  finishing(my life)
activity  presentaion  subject  writing
moving touching blessing
happy delighted
<Green card>
 

2013년 1월 16일 수요일

construct my essay about a movie, BRAVE






                             construct my essay about a movie, BRAVE



재미있는 영화 한편..This time, I will tell you my essay about 'brave'. In the movie,  the 'brave' the protagonist Merida is a princess who is good at archery. Her mother, the queen, thought rule(grace) is very important so she educated Merida about these things. Merida felt disgusted and decided to change her mother's mind. She met a witch and recieved a magic pie. she brought pie home and give it to her mother. So the queen changed into a bear. They (Merida and queen) tried to change her back to a real person then they made a good relationship. After watching 'brave', I felt that 'relationship; and 'being brave'are very important message in the movie.

At first, I didn't like Merida's three brothers because they were mischievous children. They didn't listen to their parent's advice(of course, Merida too) and stole bread. But they showed relationship with their sister Merida when she got into danger.(she was confined to her room) Merida said, "Bring the key!" and they took the key from housekeeper for her. I was surprised because the naughty boys listened to their sister's talking and saved her from danger. I realized that the brothers (or sisters) help is important I'm in trouble. (My brother may help me, when I get into a trouble.)) I think I need to close relationship with my brother.

Also, I thought the relationship with your  mother and father is very important, too. In the movie, if her mother doesn't follow Merida when she was a bear, she will get into danger. I thought she gets out of danger because she followed her daughter. And if her father didn't listen to his daughter' words, he would kill his wife. I thought a good relationship with your family can protect you from bad things. I thought we have to respect each other.

I thought, Merida changing her mother into a bear was bad but that effort(to change her mother's character) was good. This action changde her and her mother's fate, too. She had to get engaged to a prince. In a fairy tale (like Snow white or Cinderella) the princess relied on the prince but Merida was different. She doesn't want that and tried to change her fate. If I were her, I will do same motion as her. I could feel her individuality and I felt refreshed by this.
If she relies on a prince and got married, I would feel very bored. But she choose another path and I felt a new feeling. I thought, I have to find my individuality.
If I just followe\ many people, I will be aperson who is very normal, so I thought I should have my 'own ideas' and walk my own way. I thought that this is very cool.

I wrote about Merida's three little brothers and the relationship with mother and father. Finally I realized that I have to make a good realationship with my family. We can help each other very well. The most of important thing iswe won't have misunderstandings and can feel happy. For this I can realize mant things. Most of all I will make good relationships and work on my individuality!

2013년 1월 8일 화요일

Ode on a elevator




<Dear elevator>


Elevator, you make many memories.
You make me excited,
You make me fretful,
And you give me thrills.
How can you make these feelings?



Elevator, you make me excited.
When I go to eat lunch, you carry me to the cafeteria.
When I go to study, you carry me to a free study room.
When I go to bed, you carry me to the 9th floor.
I really love these times,.
when you carry me there, I feel excited.



Elevator, you make me fretful.
In the morning, I have to go study.
WE must go out of our rooms by 8:20 but,
I feel that I'll be late. I mutter to you.
'Please....hurry...hurry...hurry....HURRY UP!!!'
You pretend to be cute so, sometimes you come to the 9th floor quickly but,
sometimes you come slowly. By the way, you always carry me 1 floor by 8:19.




Elevator, you give me thrills.
In the elevator, people talk with me.
I meet my friends and I am glad to meet them.
Of course we talk in English but sometimes we talk in Korean.
We share funny stories.
At that time, you warn to me,
"This floor, PAs will get on here."
And really, PAs come into elevator.
Sometimes I didn't hear your voice and PAs discover using Korean.
Then we will recieve an EOP card.
But I don't worry because you warn me.



Elevator, I hope to get many things from you.
Sometimes I want to move fast, sometimes I want to move slowly.
Once in a while, I want you to stop.
(You stop when I am not in there.)
But you listen to my voice and everyday come to me.
I think I'm grateful to you.
Lunch is coming, please come to me quickly!



Sincerely, Joanne.



My goals

Here are my goals.


Goal 1 : I will sleep early.

What steps do I need to take to achieve this goal?
First, I do my homework quickly.
Second, I eat my meals quickly.
Last, I eat honjung bread quickly.



Goal 2 : I will exercise more.

What steps do I need to take to achieve this goal?
First, I wake up early and stretch in morning.
Second, I walk a corridor.
Last, I stretch after dinner.



Goal 3 : I will keep my health.

What steps do I need to take to achieve this goal?
First, I have to wear warmly.(hat, neckcloth, coat)
Second, stretch more.
Last, drink more water.

I will achieve these goals!

2013년 1월 4일 금요일

Ode on a snow


             Ode on a snow

                                                                                                                      by Joanne

White, pure, clean
you realized my happy memorizes


Fresh, new, ice
you gave me happy days


You came with
Happy christmas,
Happy new year


But sometimes you pretend to be cute
you hit my cheeks
cover my eyes, then I can't walk



But I will love you
even when you make my feet cold
will remember you all the time



People wish to the first snow
and I wish


Please stop now