2013년 1월 4일 금요일
Ode on a snow
Ode on a snow
by Joanne
White, pure, clean
you realized my happy memorizes
Fresh, new, ice
you gave me happy days
You came with
Happy christmas,
Happy new year
But sometimes you pretend to be cute
you hit my cheeks
cover my eyes, then I can't walk
But I will love you
even when you make my feet cold
will remember you all the time
People wish to the first snow
and I wish
Please stop now
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Hi, Joanne. I'm Chanjung your writing TA. This ode, I think is very humorous. I also think that the snow should stop during Camp, because it gets way colder if it snows. I think the contrast between your attitude towards the snow, which befits the purpose of this essay, makes it more powerful and interesting to read.
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