Argument essay

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<Using cable car  in public parks has a good effect>

class.19 Joanne

Many people think that using cable cars in public parks has a bad effect. Yes, it has some problems but it also has good effects, too. Therefore, using cable cars in public parks is a good idea. I will present some examples.

First, all people can go to mountain. Especially children, old people and disabled persons can't climb the mountain well. But if there is a cable car, all people can climb the mountains. Actually a public park means 'All people can use this park' But if some people can't climb, it is not possible for all people to use. We have to make it possible for all people to be able to climb.

Second, unused cable cars can create pollution. About 20 years ago, we could bring some food (like soup, nuddle,.....use fire) into mountain. But it made terrible pollution so we can't bring these things now. So many people bring processed foodstuff. Of course, people should dump their trash in the appoint area. But, some people(perhaps many people)don't do it. They throw trash into the road, near the river and so on. So trash is piled up in the mountains and the mountain becomes dirty. If we establish a cable car, we can reduce trash in the mountain.

Third, cable car can help a region's economy. Some people who live in the country, they sell medicinal herbs and honey. thy can't make many money. But if there is a cable car, many people will come.Then they will eat food, buy mountain-climbing supplies, even sleep there! The country people can make more money than it develop region's economy.

Of course, some people disagree. They suggest that we should make a comfortable road instead of a cable car so anyone can use it. But it isn't easy to do. If they feel sore in their legs or part of body? They can't drive the mountains, also it is unfair thing for them if the do not have a car. 

Some people also think that using a cable car can create pollution. Building iron tops and pouring cement into the mountain is a really bad thing for the environment. But, using a cable car doesn't harm the environment. It is established in a limited area so the environment adapts and changes.

Also some people disagree and think that public mountain's purpose is not for region's economy. It's purpose is to enjoy the mountain. Yeah, it is right, too. But using cable cars makes it more comfortable to climb mountains, so climbers can climb easily. Also it helps the region's economy so people who live the country can have many advantages. Using cable car creates more advantages than not using a cable car.

Using a cable car helps everyone to climb the mountain, also it can reduce pollution, too. Of course, we have to use eco-friendly site.  And it has to consider the environment. So I think that we have to use cable cars to give us comfort and provide a service to us.